SCRIPTAGE 9: JASON GOES TO HELL!

I'm back this month, I think Scriptage may be a once a month thing for those keeping score, with more previewing from Vapor chapter 3. I think this may be it for Vapor pages for now, at least till the graphic novel hits. That, or maybe I'll do earlier pages, but I think I want to spice it up a bit. Anyways, these are the next two pages following the last Scriptage:

VENGEANCE OF
THE VAPOR

By Sal Cipriano

CHAPTER 3

PAGE 3

3.1: Back in the cabin, Kate grabs a scalpel from Doc's stash. The Doc looks on in concern.

DOC: WHAT YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING, KATE?
KATE: WHATEVER I HAVE TO, DOC.
JACK (op): AH, FOOLISH GIRL.

3.2: On Jack who is seated on the floor in meditation.

JACK: YOU GO AND GET KILLED, BUT NO HONOR CAN COME FROM THIS.

3.3: Brooks walks back into the home, he looks spent. The guard from last issue, Burt, is behind him.

BROOKS: NO ONE'S GETTING KILLED.
BURT: YOU CAN GO ON HOME NOW, YELLOW TAIL.

3.4: Jack stands up to meet Burt. Jack is quite serious, and Burt looks a little scared.

JACK: WHEN YOU SLEEP TONIGHT, A DRAGON WILL COME AND EAT AWAY YOUR DREAMS.

3.5: Jack walks out as Burt looks at him in fear.

3.6: Brooks puts the blanket down as Kate comes and puts her hand on his shoulder. In the background Burt exits and closes the door behind him.

KATE: BROOKS, WHAT HAPPENED?
BROOKS: LOTS OF WEIRDNESS IN THIS TOWN, KATE.

PAGE 4

4.1: Brooks goes and lies down leaving Kate and Doc questioning.

BROOKS: BUT WHEN I GET UP I'M GONNA MAKE SURE WE MAKE IT OUT ALIVE.
KATE: WHAT? HOW?

4.2: Close up on Brooks' head and shoulders as he turns away from a shocked Kate and Doc.

BROOKS: I'M GONNA GO HELP THE HEAVY COMMUNICATE WITH HIS DEAD WIFE... HE'LL LET US GO AFTER THAT.

4.3: Kate goes crazy and Doc tries to calm her down stepping in front of her and putting his hands on her arms.

KATE: ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?! HE'LL NEVER LET US OUT OF HERE ALIVE!
DOC: PLEASE LET HIM REST. HE ISN'T THINKING STRAIGHT!

4.4: Kate pulls away from Doc.

KATE: THE HELL HE ISN'T! THERE'S ONLY ONE WAY TO GET US OUT OF THIS MESS.

4.5: She storms out of the cabin into the night.

KATE: AND IT'S NOT TAKIN' FANCY PICTURES!
DOC: KATE, DON'T DO ANYTHING STUPID!

4.6: A worried Doc turns to see the exhausted Brooks sitting up again.

BROOKS: CAN'T A MAN GET ANY SLEEP IN THIS TOWN?